please tell me where i go wrong

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    razak
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    Hello YSC members,
    I had to do this; had to vent out, needed to tell somebody, my true story, am not a writer, never ever did write anything, this just flowed out of me, now I feel I can do better if you guys guide me
    Kindly give your comments & some feedback about my story ‘her love and pain’ published on 8/1/16. Under the category love & romance Hope you guys would give it a read.
    http://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/sad-love-story-her-love-pain/

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