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Sneak Eyes on a Saturday Night

Published by Jeff Potts in category Poetry with tag Dreams | Friends | window

Its a Saturday night and there’s no reason to go out.

I have everything I need.

I have beer in the fridge and French cigarettes in my pocket

and half can of beans in the cubed.

I have no reason to go out.

No friends to meet in that bar on the west-side of Pink Lane avenue,

filled with men, the shadows of their former self s, blended by the

dust of coal mines that have long gone, and like them the beer is cheap.

No, no, no its dangers out there on a Saturday night.

So take a seat and put your feet up, and we will talk about yesteryear,

when we all had techno coloured dreams and danced the night away

hie on 80s pop too loud for your mama’s ears to bier, now our shoes

are filled with concrete, standing by empty beds fall of lies.

No its dangers out there on a Saturday night.

Outside my window a snake eyes in a top hat crawls on its belly, with

cigarette dangling from finger tip claw, withers its way in and out

of empty window shop frames, eyes a preacher man standing on a create

full of broken dreams, with billboard in out-reached hand, shouts to the world

that god love’s them, as he try s with all his might to turn back a tide of

cigarette ends, plastic paper bags, blowing amongst the dust of old rags.

“God love’s you! He demands passion in his eyes, almost erupting into

anger as he competes in a losing battle against drunks with special

brew glued to hands, as they sleep on blue static light of an 80s techno

coloured nightmare.

Speaking in their own coded language that the rest of mankind don’t really

understand.

“God love’s you! He repeats in a howl, as he drowns in his own self

importance, but his voice soon vanishes as Snake Eyes raps his mouth

around his frame and devourers in one sitting, all to the applause of

drunking fan’s. Then they go back to the business of drinking themselves

to obliven, of broken promises to a boy they one’s knew.

Man its dangers out there on a Saturday night.

I see dogs in hats leading kittens on strings, I see stick men in jackets

to big for their despairing frames.

I see all the lonely and depressed in blood stained glasses marching as one,

just for a while, marching towards invisible castles to demand their due,

lighting barn-fires as the go.

Man its dangers out there on a Saturday night.

I eye a little girl, jumping Jack high, jumping down on beat

street corner, clicking her finger to the rhythm of street light.

Dancing pop cans follow her feet in the cool wind of sweet

night time.

She dances past big red neon signs advertising coca-cola

and McDonnell new and approved Big Mac, with moon shinning

down on her smiling face, as she hits the grove fantastic to Frank Sinatra

wannabes in back rooms, with sweat pouring from their brows,

falling down drunk on the excess of swing soul music as

Courtney Pine and the like play on to sun up.

The Jazz man plays the Jack of hearts in the lions den until

there is nothing left but the shirts of their backs, stirring into

whisky glasses.

Snake Eyes sees the little girl tip towing past my window from

outside.

I can almost touch with stretch out hand, but scared that she

will disappear into thin air, so I shout “Hey girl get along home

its dangers out there on a Saturday night”. Then she vanishes,

disappearing amongst a gathering mass of shadow.

So Snake Eyes looks towards me and groans.

Man its dangers out here on a Saturday night.

–END–

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