Newbie's Story "Beautiful Nightmare"

[Tigale]

Hey there! I just signed up to this website a few days ago, and I’ve finally written my very first story. I love to write but I need to improve in so many different aspects, so if you would be so kind to read and comment or critique on my story, it would mean a lot to me. Thank you:)

Here’s the link:
https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/love-short-story-beautiful-nightmare/

Thanks again:)

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