Review: Not As It Is!!!

[Mukul Priyadarshi]

You are requested to review a short story named ‘Not As It Is!!!’ and send your valuable comments.

https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-social-moral/social-short-story-not-as-it-is/

[Ankit Raj Bachchan]

The overall theme was very nice, very touchy. however it ended in a hurry.
It started really well but i feel more scenes from anandalya could have been incorporated and a vivid description was missing. review my story @ https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-family/family-short-story-my-fathers-death-action-rewind/ and https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/short-story-threesome-love-triangle/

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