Review of In your memory,Like an experience…

[Ruchira shukla]

You are requested to review a short story named ‘Not As It Is!!!’ and send your valuable comments.

{{moderated: link of only publish story is visible to public}}

[Ankit Raj Bachchan]

Hey, you’ve not given the right link.
please repost with the correct link :)

[Ruchira shukla]

When I am clicking its working.[:O]

[Ruchira shukla]

https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-social-moral/short-story-in-your-memory/

 

try this.

[Ankit Raj Bachchan]

Yes, this is the right link and it worked.
I read your story, it had a very nice message to it. the complications going within the main character is nicely portrayed. The dialogues are smartly written. It shows that you have spent a lot of time thinking about the story.
But, being a writer, you will feel excited after you write any story as it’s your baby. you will want to get it publicized instantly. but I suggest you to spend some alone time after writing the story. try to edit your work 3-4 times. this will make your story crisp.
After writing, think of finding faults in your own story. it makes you q better writer.
Hope you understand these things. I got these tips from my bro and I am passing it to you. These tips really work.

Meanwhile, if you have time, do check my story and give your valuable reviews..
https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/romance-short-story-tonight-you-are-mine/
Will be waiting for your words. :)

[YourStoryClub]

Hello Ruchira, please use link of only published stories to share publicly. Unpublished story has temporary link and is visible to only writer and yourstoryclub staff.

[Ruchira shukla]

Hey thank u so much for the review.Yes,you are right as this was my first story so I was very excited.I’ll definitely work on your tips to improve writing.

Thank you so much :)

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