review of short story- 'The Final Rejection'

[Arnab Sarkar]

hi guys I am really looking forward to improve my writing skills here! And I would luv to knw if there are any suggestions or grammatical or vocabulary advice you would like to give abt my story The Final Rejection…though it has been selected as Editor’s Choice,i personally feel some efficiency in there in it…here I post the link!
https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-love/love-short-story-final-rejection/

you can go thru it and notify me of any errors in it! Or just any tips to improve the quality…
waiting forward fr ur feedback guys…
thanks…. :)

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