Review "Tell Me Would You Kill?"

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This topic has 3 replies, 3 voices, and was last updated 6 years, 10 months ago by Ankit Raj Bachchan.

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February 10, 2013 at 2:42 pm #34450

Trissh10
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HI! I’d really appreciate it if you guys review my story “Tell Me Would You Kill?”.
It is my very first story here, so I’m open to criticism. I’d like to know the areas I may have come short in. It’d help me improve my writing.
Thanks! :)

February 10, 2013 at 2:44 pm #34452

Trissh10
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Oh. here’s the link: https://yourstoryclub.com/short-stories-social-moral/afghanistan-war-short-story-would-you-kill/

Haha :P

February 14, 2013 at 10:41 am #34847

Ruchira shukla
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Nice Story..Liked it very much

February 14, 2013 at 10:47 am #34849

Ankit Raj Bachchan
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wait.. I will read and comment about it sooner

wont you read mine?
Tonight, You are Mine
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